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The pie charts below shows the percentage of pet ownership over the years

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The given pie charts presented compare and contrast the differences in the ratio of the various pet's ownership ( dogs, cats, fish, rabbits and rodents) in the years 2008, 2018 and forecasted year 2028. In general, the proportion of dog's ownership was the most highest over the three given years; however, rabbits were the least preferred one. To embark, as evident from the illustrations, in 2008, the percentile of dog's ownership was over a half (55%), whereas it declined significantly to 45% in a decade. Moreover, in 2028, it is anticipated that the ratio of dog as a pet will be unchanged (45%). With regards to the fish, the ratio of fish ownership in 2008 was not as much high as in 2018. Around 6%, in 2008, while in the next decade, it reached to 23%. Moving further, with reference to the rabbits, it can be forecasted that the percentile of rabbits as a pet will be on the top in 2028 (20%). On the other hand, there was a slight drop in the percentage of rodent's ownership from 2008 (4%) to 2018 (2%) by 2%.
The
given
pie charts presented compare and contrast the differences in the ratio of the various pet's
ownership
(
dogs, cats, fish,
rabbits
and rodents) in the years 2008, 2018 and forecasted year 2028.

In general
, the proportion of dog's
ownership
was the
most highest
over the three
given
years;
however
,
rabbits
were the least preferred one.

To embark, as evident from the illustrations, in 2008, the percentile of dog's
ownership
was over a half (55%), whereas it declined
significantly
to 45% in a decade.
Moreover
, in 2028, it
is anticipated
that the ratio of dog as a pet will
be unchanged
(45%).
With regards to
the fish, the ratio of fish
ownership
in 2008 was not as much high as in 2018. Around 6%, in 2008, while in the
next
decade, it reached to 23%.

Moving
further
, with reference to the
rabbits
, it can
be forecasted
that the percentile of
rabbits
as a pet will be on the top in 2028 (20%).
On the other hand
, there was a slight drop in the percentage of rodent's
ownership
from 2008 (4%) to 2018 (2%) by 2%.
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