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The pie charts below shows the percentage of pet ownership over the years

The pie charts below shows the percentage of pet ownership over the years ORrKE

The given pie charts presented compare and contrast the differences in the ratio of the various pet's ownership ( dogs, cats, fish, rabbits and rodents) in the years 2008, 2018 and forecasted year 2028. In general, the proportion of dog's ownership was the most highest over the three given years; however, rabbits were the least preferred one. To embark, as evident from the illustrations, in 2008, the percentile of dog's ownership was over a half (55%), whereas it declined significantly to 45% in a decade. Moreover, in 2028, it is anticipated that the ratio of dog as a pet will be unchanged (45%). With regards to the fish, the ratio of fish ownership in 2008 was not as much high as in 2018. Around 6%, in 2008, while in the next decade, it reached to 23%. Moving further, with reference to the rabbits, it can be forecasted that the percentile of rabbits as a pet will be on the top in 2028 (20%). On the other hand, there was a slight drop in the percentage of rodent's ownership from 2008 (4%) to 2018 (2%) by 2%.

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 was over a half (55%), whereas it declined significantly
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 decade, it reached to 23%.

Moving further
, with reference to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrodentharebunny
rabbits
, it can be forecasted
 that the percentile of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrodentharebunny
rabbits
 as a pet will be on the top in 2028 (20%). On the other hand
, there was a slight drop in the percentage of rodent's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrolpurchasepartnershipholdingpropertytakeover
ownership
 from 2008 (4%) to 2018 (2%) by 2%. 