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Pie chart about the reason of worldwide land degradation

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The pie chart shows the main cause of worldwide land degradation, and the table shows the situation in North American, Europe and Oceania. The three main reasons affected the land’s produce including over-grazing, deforestation and over-cultivation. Europe is been affected most for about 23%. The reason why Europe been effected so much, could be concidered from a big number from each cause. As a comparision, Oceania effected mostly in over-grazing for 11. 3%, which is the highedt level in three regions listed, but the total land degraded is only 13%, 10% fewer than Europe, because Oceania is barely effected by deforestation or over-cultivation. North American been affected fewest in three regions for only 5%. Over-cultivation is the main reason affected North American, while Oceania dosen’t been affected by over-cultivation at all. On the other hand, North America only affected by over-grazing for 1. 5%, which is the lowest level in three regions.
The pie chart
shows
the main cause of worldwide land degradation, and the table
shows
the situation in North American, Europe and Oceania.

The three main reasons
affected
the land’s produce including over-grazing, deforestation and over-cultivation. Europe
is been
affected
most for about 23%. The reason why Europe
been effected
so
much, could be
concidered
from a
big
number from each cause. As a
comparision
, Oceania effected
mostly
in over-grazing for 11. 3%, which is the
highedt
level in three regions listed,
but
the total land degraded is
only
13%, 10% fewer than Europe,
because
Oceania is
barely
effected by deforestation or over-cultivation.

North American been
affected
fewest in three regions for
only
5%. Over-cultivation is the main reason
affected
North American, while Oceania
dosen
’t been
affected
by over-cultivation at all.
On the other hand
, North America
only
affected
by over-grazing for 1. 5%, which is the lowest level in three regions.
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IELTS academic Pie chart about the reason of worldwide land degradation

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152 words
6.0
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