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The pie charts below show the spending of a school in the UK from 1981 to 2001.

The pie charts below show the spending of a school in the UK from 1981 to 2001. D62Nj

The three pie chart gives us information about total UK school expenditures in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Overall, according to the statistic, we can clearly observe that all three years’ teachers’ salaries made up the highest part of the expenditure in the chart. In 1981, 40 percent UK school spent on the teachers’ salaries which was increased to 10 percent in 1991. Following this, the next major categories were other workers’ salaries which is 28 percent in 1981 and 22 percent in 1991. 15 percent are spent on the resources such as books. However, it leaps to 5 percent after 10 years. In the case of furniture and equipment in 1981 15 percent disbursement whereas 5 percent in 1991. Both year less than 3 percent are spent on insurance. In contrast, as per the figure 2001, like other two year teachers’ salaries (45 percent) is the significant part of expenditure in UK school. On the contrary, over the 20 years, the second most expenditure changes into furniture and equipment that is 23 percent. Meanwhile, 9 percent and 15 percent are for resources and others workers’ salaries. While there is a rise in the insurance categories to 8 percent in 2001.

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