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Frequency of eating at fast food restaurants

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The bar chart depicts the rate of coming to fast food restaurants of American in three points of time which were 2003, 2006, and 2013, by the way, the bar’s unit is measured in percentage. Overall, people in America seemed to come to fast food restaurants regularly in three years 2003, 2006, and 2013. Many Americans tended to eat at fast food restaurants once a week in 2006, but they frequently consumed fast foods there once or twice a month in 2013. In 2003, there were over 31% of Americans came to fast food restaurants once a week and this figure went to about 33% three years later, in 2006. Nevertheless, in 2013, the percentage of people who ate in fast food restaurants every week significantly dropped to 27%. Besides, the figure for Americans who ate fast foods on the spot once or twice a week stood at 30%, however, it dramatically decreased to 25% in 2006 before reached to 33% in 2013. On the other hand, the percentage of Americans eating at fast food restaurants every day was lowest, it was only 4% in 2003 and it went to 3% in both year 2006 and 2013. In addition, the rate of Americans who never ate at fast food restaurants was low too, in 2003, the figure for it was 5 in percentage, but lower in 2006 and 2013. The number was 4% in those two years.
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of American in three points of time which were 2003, 2006, and 2013, by the way, the bar’s unit
is measured
in percentage.

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in America seemed to
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in three years 2003, 2006, and 2013.
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in 2006,
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or twice a month in 2013.

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and this figure went to about 33% three years later, in 2006.
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significantly
dropped to 27%.
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stood at 30%,
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reached to 33% in 2013.

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every day was lowest, it was
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4% in 2003 and it went to 3% in both
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2006 and 2013.
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was low too, in 2003, the figure for it was 5 in percentage,
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lower in 2006 and 2013. The number was 4% in those two years.
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IELTS academic Frequency of eating at fast food restaurants

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6.5
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