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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

These two maps displays the changes that have happend in libraries since 2000. There is a big diffrence between the content of libraries in 2000 and libraries now. In 20th Century, Most of the books were fiction books, but nowadays libraries contain only a few shelves of fiction books. In the past there was no space for desks and chairs to sit and study, athough; today's libraries have the facilities of study tables for book readers. Today's libraries are more comfortable than old libraries. In the past there was no cafe for readers to provide tea and coffee, but in today's libraries people have the previlage to drink tea or coffee and enjoy reading books. In 20th Century, libraries contained books about about fiction, travel, art, hobbies, cookery and non-fiction. Today's liraries are more comfortable than libraries in the past. The format and content of libraries have changed a lot since 2000.
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were fiction
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,
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nowadays libraries contain
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a few shelves of fiction
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. In the past there was no space for desks and chairs to sit and study,
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readers.
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libraries. In the past there was no
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for readers to provide tea and coffee,
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to drink tea or coffee and enjoy reading books.

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about about
fiction, travel, art, hobbies, cookery and non-fiction.

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IELTS academic The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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