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The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun.. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The given diagram depict how the energy emitted from the sun gets trapped due to greenhouse gases. As a whole, logging of trees and fossil fuels from vehicles seems to be the main reasons for green house gases emission. Getting back to the content, the energy emitted from the sun gets converted into heat when it hits the surface, which in turn is radiated back to the space. However, case may not be the same every time, that means heat energy released from ground either gets stucked in the atmosphere due to green house gases or is absorbed by the clouds. For all this, one of major cause is deforestation. Since trees absorb CO2 gas (one of the major green house gas), cutting of trees releases CO2 in the atmosphere. On the other hand, burning of fossil fuels in water and land vehicles liberates green house gases which in turn remains in the atmosphere. This is how green house gases traps the energy from the sun.
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emitted from the sun
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trapped due to greenhouse
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gases
. As a whole, logging of trees and fossil fuels from vehicles seems to be the main reasons for
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green
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house
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emission. Getting back to the content, the
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emitted from the sun
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converted into heat when it hits the surface, which in turn
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released from ground either
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gases
or
is absorbed
by the clouds. For all this, one of major cause is deforestation. Since trees absorb CO2 gas (one of the major
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green
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gas), cutting of trees releases CO2 in the atmosphere.
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, burning of fossil fuels in water and land vehicles liberates
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green
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house
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gases
which in turn remains in the atmosphere. This is how
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traps the
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IELTS academic The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun. . Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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166 words
6.0
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