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The pie charts below show the participation of people in-game shows in the US in the year 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the participation of people in-game shows in the US in the year 2021. BgdRV
The pie charts illustrate, the involvement of indiviuals in game shows in the year 2021 which has been taken place at US. Overall, more number of womens are participating in the games shows than men except in Lotto. Moreover, more number of girls took place in quization and Master chef. Firstly, womens are engaging in the quization, spin the wheel and master chef. Secondly, around 60% women took place in quization, half of the lady people participated in spin the wheel and 90% of the females engaged in master chef. However, a few member of males joined these programs. Most of the men has joined in the lotto. Over, 70% gents attented to this, and 50% members participated in spin in the wheel. On the other hand only 30% females attended to the lotto. It is quite evident that most of the male individuals are showing intrest to participate in lotto and spin the wheel.
The pie charts illustrate, the involvement of
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indiviuals
in game
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shows
in the year 2021 which has
been taken
place at US.
Overall
, more number of
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womens
are participating in the games
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shows
than
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men
except in
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Lotto
.
Moreover
, more number of girls took place in
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quization
and Master chef.

Firstly
,
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womens
are engaging in the
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quization
,
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spin
the
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wheel
and master chef.
Secondly
, around 60% women took place in
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quization
, half of the lady
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people
participated in
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spin
the
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wheel
and 90% of the females engaged in master chef.

However
, a
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few member
of males
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joined
these programs. Most of the
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men
has
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joined
in the
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lotto
. Over, 70% gents
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attented
to this, and 50% members participated in
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spin
in the
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wheel
.
On the other hand
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only
30% females attended to the
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lotto
. It is quite evident that most of the male individuals are showing
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intrest
to participate in
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lotto
and
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spin
the
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wheel
.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show the participation of people in-game shows in the US in the year 2021.

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  American English
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155 words
6.0
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