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The maps below show the surface of the earth before and after the continental drift. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the surface of the earth before and after the continental drift. GJ5aj
The maps demonstrate about how earth looks, before and after the continental drift. Overall, there is only one surface on the earth before the drift, the contries are connected to each other. However, after a few decades the surface started to drift and divided into continents. Firstly, before the continental drift the eart exterior is combined to each other. The surface started to drift gradually after a some years the continents have formed. Secondly, there is only one ocean in the world, that Tethys ocean before the continental drift. More over, all the countries are located in one continent called Pangaea. On the other hand, after surface seperation more continents and oceans were formed. Additionally, 6 more continents were created namely Africa, Eurasia, Asia, North America, South America, Arctic and Antarctica. This drift seperated the area and made travelling difficult. Dispite of this, the change in genetics happend quickly, because of the continents are located in various postions on the earth.
The maps demonstrate about how earth looks,
before
and after the continental drift.
Overall
, there is
only
one
surface
on the earth
before
the drift, the
contries
are connected
to each other.
However
, after a few decades the
surface
started
to drift and divided into continents.

Firstly
,
before
the continental drift the
eart
exterior
is combined
to each other. The
surface
started
to drift
gradually
after a
some
years the
continents
have formed.
Secondly
, there is
only
one ocean in the world, that Tethys ocean
before
the continental drift. More over, all the countries
are located
in one continent called Pangaea.

On the other hand
, after
surface
seperation
more
continents
and oceans
were formed
.
Additionally
, 6 more
continents
were created
namely
Africa, Eurasia, Asia, North America, South America, Arctic and Antarctica. This drift
seperated
the area and made travelling difficult.
Dispite
of this, the
change
in genetics
happend
quickly
,
because
of the
continents
are located
in various
postions
on the earth.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the surface of the earth before and after the continental drift.

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