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Goods transported in UK from 1974 to 2002

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The line graph gives information about goods that are transported in UK from 1974 to 2002. Overall, the number of goods transported by road was the highest throughout the period. If we look at the amount of goods that are transported by pipeline was the lowest throughout the period. In 1974 the amount of goods transported by pipeline saw a decrease, then we can see goods transported by pipeline remained stable. As in 1978, between 1990 and 1994 sawa small jump. Again from 1994 to 2002 goods transported in UK by pipeline remained stable. Transported goods by rail saw a slight decrease from 1974 to 1986 at 35 million tonnes. Between 1986 and 2002 the goods that are transported flactuated. In UK goods transported by water saw a rapid increase from 1974 to 1982 to 55 million tonnes. After which the number of goods that are transported by water remained stable from 1982 to 1994. Then has a small flactuation from 1994 to 2002 the number peaked at 62 million tonnes. The amount of goods that are transported by road saw a small flactuation from 1974 to 1982. There was a small rise from 1982 to 1990 that peaked at 81 million tonnes. Unfortunately, the amount of goods remained stable in 4 years. Nevertheless, goods increased in 1994 that peaked at 97. Again goods that are transported by road remained stable between 1998 and 2002
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in UK from 1974 to 2002.

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, the number of
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transported by road was the highest throughout the period.
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amount
of
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goods
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are transported
by pipeline was the lowest throughout the period.

In 1974 the
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transported by pipeline
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a decrease, then we can
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transported by pipeline
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remained
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. As in 1978, between 1990 and 1994
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sawa
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jump. Again from 1994 to 2002
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transported in UK by pipeline
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remained
stable.

Transported
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by rail
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a slight decrease from 1974 to 1986 at 35
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tonnes. Between 1986 and 2002 the
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flactuated
.

In UK
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a rapid increase from 1974 to 1982 to 55
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from 1982 to 1994. Then has a
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from 1994 to 2002 the number peaked at 62
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from 1974 to 1982. There was a
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rise from 1982 to 1990 that peaked at 81
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tonnes. Unfortunately, the
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in 4 years.
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,
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increased in 1994 that peaked at 97. Again
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between 1998 and 2002
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IELTS academic Goods transported in UK from 1974 to 2002

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234 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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