Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The diagram estimates Australia’s recorded transportations every two years from 2010 to 2014

The diagram estimates Australia’s recorded transportations every two years from 2010 to 2014 ELxnQ
The diagram estimates Australia’s recorded transportations every two years from 2010 to 2014. It is manifest that enrollment in all categories of vehicles in the table goes up over the period shown. Among five, the abundance of motor buses registered was the hugest, whereas there was a dramatic growth in the figure for motorbikes. In 2010, standing at 11, 800, 000, the number of motorcoaches registered was the highest, over 100 times the lowest figure among the five, which belongs to light-duty vehicles. The second-highest numeral was in the business section with 2, 300, 000 wheels listed, followed by motorcycles and heavy trucks with 540, 000 & 384, 000 sequentially. After the four-year term, scooters witnessed 709, 000 registrations, striking the highest rise with 30. 8%. At 23. 5%, there was considerable growth of light wagons enrollments, as opposed to 17. 4% in the commercial part. Heavy-duty lorries leaped by 32, 000 filings, hitting the lowest jump with 8. 3%, 1, 9% less than the proportion of passenger cars’ surge.
The diagram estimates Australia’s recorded transportations every two years from 2010 to 2014. It is manifest that enrollment in all categories of vehicles in the table goes up over the period shown. Among five, the abundance of motor buses registered was the hugest, whereas there was a dramatic growth in the figure for motorbikes.

In 2010, standing at 11, 800, 000, the number of
Possible spelling mistake found.
motorcoaches
registered was the highest, over 100 times the lowest figure among the five, which belongs to light-duty vehicles. The second-highest numeral was in the business section with 2, 300, 000 wheels listed, followed by motorcycles and heavy trucks with 540, 000 & 384, 000
sequentially
.

After the four-year term, scooters witnessed 709, 000 registrations, striking the highest rise with 30. 8%. At 23. 5%, there was considerable growth of light wagons enrollments, as opposed to 17. 4% in the commercial part. Heavy-duty lorries leaped by 32, 000 filings, hitting the lowest jump with 8. 3%, 1, 9% less than the proportion of passenger cars’ surge.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The diagram estimates Australia’s recorded transportations every two years from 2010 to 2014

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
170 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 5.5band
    the proportion of civilian staying in Australia who came from various parts of the world including the United Kingdom, Asia, and other regions between 1976 and 2011.
    The given chart depicts the average cost of monthly contract for four different mobiles in a European country over the nine month period from January to September 2002. At the first glance, there was an upward trend in the cost of the four services, especially Alpha, which has been skyrocketed since...
  • 6.5band
    the proportions of sale commodity in various types.
    The pie chats illustrate the proportions of sale commodity in various types. Overall, a major change was expected in what people spend moneyin2014. In 2012, other products is the most common bought of people with surprisingly 82%, on the contrary after 2 years, these profit is replaced with compute...
  • 5band
    writing task 1. unfortunately I can't upload the chart
    The graph below illustrates the percentage change in the number of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. According to the chart the number of international graduates rose in all the Canadian provinces in 2006 comparing to the year...
  • 6band
    why students in different age groups study and how they are supported by the employers
    The charts below demonstrate why students in different age groups study and how they are supported by the employers. Overall, as the age of groups become older, the intention of learning for career decreased by ages and learning for interest is opposed. For groups that above 30 years old, the time a...
  • 5.5band
    Cgyy6sytdfufhdjfjf did Yy
    The given line graph compare the three law breaking offenses, namely car theft, house burgalary and Street robbery, in two countries, which is England and Wales, between 1970 and 2005. The number of crimes counted in millions. Overall it can be seen that, cases of car thefts were maximum and Street...
  • 7band
    Top medal winners of all time and medal won in all Olympics
    The provided line graph indicates a number of selected countries having achieved the most medals in all Olympics. In contrast, the presented table depicts 5 successful athletes in swimming, Gymnastics, and Biathlon based on their origins. A glance at the data reveals that the USA and then USSR havin...