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THE PIE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE COMPARISON OF DIFFERENT KINDS OF ENERGY PRODUCTION OF FRANCE IN TWO YEARS

THE TWO PIE CHARTS ILLUSTRATE A CLEAR CUT COMPARISON BETWEEN THE ENERGY PRODUCTION SUCH AS GAS, COAL, PETRO, NUCLEAR AND OTHER IN FRANCE IN THE YEARS 1995 AND 2005. OVERALL, THE HIGHEST PROPORTION IN 2 CHARTS IS THE COAL AND GAS, WHILE COMPARING OTHER THREE HAD VARIATION IN PERCENTAGEWISE AS INCREASE OR DECREASE. FIRSTLY, THE COAL AND THE GAS OWN AROUND A FIFTH ( ABOUT 29. 80 AND 29. 63 PERCENTAGE RESPECTIVELY ) IN 1995. AFTER A DECADE ( 2005 ), IT ALSO MARKED AS 30. 93 % AND 30. 31 %. NEXT, NUCLEAR AND OTHER SHOW ROSE APPROXIMATELY 4. 5 WHICH IS ALMOST A FIFTH FROM 1995 TO 2005. FINALLY, A DECREASE IN PETROL OF DIFFERENCE ONE IN TEN FROM 1995 TO 2005.

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 ROSE APPROXIMATELY 4. 5 WHICH IS ALMOST A FIFTH FROM 1995 TO 2005. FINALLY
, A DECREASE IN PETROL OF DIFFERENCE ONE IN TEN FROM 1995 TO 2005. 

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