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The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Global wealth is a very important characteristc of a territory. Population on the other hand is a statistic which can explain many aspects of lives of people of a specific region. These two factors together can show distribution of wealth among the population of a country and by this mean many other socio-economic factors could be interpreted. One can infere that the bigger the population is, the more human resources available and we can expect more wealth in more crowded countries and regions. but the actual distribution of Golbal wealth is the exact opposite. We can understand from Global wealth chart that most of the Global wealth belongs to countries with less population. For conclusion, as the chart suggests, this is not the population number which determines wealth and economic value. Surprisingly there is an inverse correlation between population and Global wealth. I believe it is the way you manage your popualtion that will lead your country to more wealth or simply keeps you poor.
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distribution of
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and by this mean
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that the bigger the
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is, the more human resources
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available and
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in more crowded
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is the exact opposite. We can understand from
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chart that most of the
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belongs to
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with less population.

For conclusion, as the chart suggests, this is not the
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population
number which determines
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wealth
and economic value.
Surprisingly
there is an inverse correlation between
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and
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. I believe it is the way you manage your
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

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