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The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph demonstrates the proportion of owned household and accommodation in rented in two countries is over 93 years from 1918 to 2011. Overall, it is clear that the percentage of household in owned increases all the period, while in rented accommodation decreased. And in owned accommodation started with 20%, in contrast, the household in rented started with 78%. The household in owned started to grow in 1918 with 20% and continued growing to 2001, then had a bit of drop. Therefore households in rented started to fall in 1918 with 78% and had bad peak in 2001 with 31% and had a little growth in 2011. The household in both had fluctuation a various period of time. The owned household fluctuated between 1989 and 1961, while rented household had a fluctuation from 1918 to 1961. All over the period household in owned had 36% and rented household had 63% in last years.
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and accommodation in rented in two countries is over 93 years from 1918 to 2011.

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, it is
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that the percentage of
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in
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increases all the period, while in rented accommodation decreased. And in
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accommodation
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started
with 20%,
in contrast
, the
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in rented
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with 78%.

The
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in
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to grow in 1918 with 20% and continued growing to 2001, then had a bit of drop.
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Therefore
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in rented
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to fall in 1918 with 78% and had
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peak in 2001 with 31% and had a
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growth in 2011.

The
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in both had fluctuation a various period of time. The
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fluctuated between 1989 and 1961, while rented
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had a fluctuation from 1918 to 1961. All over the period
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in
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had 36% and rented
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had 63% in last years.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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