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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart, a pie chart represents what the Anthropology alumni from a university did after their undergraduate study graduation, and the table provides the income of the anthropologists after working for five years. Generally speaking, half of the Anthropology graduates become a full-time worker after five years of graduation while working part-time together with studying postgraduate is the least common for the alumni. Half of the graduates who works in government sector earned more than hundred thousands dollar. A specific analysis reveals that the percentages of the graduates who become a full-time postgraduate students is equal with the unknown status after their graduation which is 8%. Additionally, 52% of the alumni working full-time, which is 37% more than the graduates who employed as part-time staff. As a final point, we can see that 5% of the students working part-time and further postgraduate study at the same time after graduation, which is 7% more than unemployed graduates. Moving on to the graduates earnings, 40% of the freelance Anthropology consultants earned around 75 to 99 thousands dollars and more than hundred thousands dollars respectively. 20% of the both graduates who work as freelance consultants and in government sectors only make less than 75 thousands dollars. However, 50% of the alumni employed in public company paid more than hundred thousands dollars. On the other side, for those who work for private companies the percentage of the earnings less than 75 thousands doubled from those who employed in government sectors and freelance consultants and only 30% received more than hundred thousands dollars income.
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first
chart, a pie chart represents what the Anthropology alumni from a university did after their undergraduate study
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graduation
, and the table provides the income of the anthropologists after
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working
for five years.

Generally
speaking, half of the Anthropology
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graduates
become a full-time worker after five years of
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graduation
while
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part-time together with studying postgraduate is the least common for the alumni. Half of the
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works in
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sector earned more than
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hundred
thousands dollar.

A specific analysis reveals that the percentages of the
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graduates
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become
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which is 8%.
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, 52% of the alumni
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full-time, which is 37% more than the
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employed as part-time staff. As a final point, we can
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that 5% of the students
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part-time and
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postgraduate study at the same time after
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, which is 7% more than unemployed graduates.

Moving on to the
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earnings, 40% of the freelance Anthropology consultants earned around 75 to 99 thousands
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and more than
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thousands
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respectively
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work as freelance consultants and in
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less than 75 thousands
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paid more than
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thousands
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work for private
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companies
the percentage of the earnings less than 75 thousands doubled from those
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employed in
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IELTS academic The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years.

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