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The pie charts below show information on book sales in Denmark between 1972 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting the main points and making comparisons where necessary.

The pie charts below show information on book sales in Denmark between 1972 and 2012. R5YVQ
The pie charts illustrate the number of books which were sold in Denmark from 1972 to 2012. Overall, the proportion of adult fiction books saw the biggest change, while the opposite was true for children’s fiction books. In addition, the biography books were usually the least popular. In 1972, the figure for adult fiction and children fiction books stood at 20%, before both increased to around 25% in 1992. There was a slight rise in children’s fiction to 25% in 2012. Meanwhile, adult fiction books experienced a significant increase to 45% in 2012. Turning to other books, there was a gradual fall in biography books, from 20% in 1972 to 8% in 2012. The proportion of travel books started at 15% in 1972 and increased to 18% in 1992, before dropping to 10% in 2012. In addition, the figure for other books decreased dramatically, from 25% in 1972 to 12% in 2012.
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, while the opposite was true for children’s
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In addition
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In 1972, the figure for adult
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and children
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stood at 20%,
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both increased to around 25% in 1992. There was a slight rise in children’s
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to 25% in 2012. Meanwhile, adult
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experienced a significant increase to 45% in 2012.

Turning to other
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, there was a gradual fall in biography
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, from 20% in 1972 to 8% in 2012. The proportion of travel
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at 15% in 1972 and increased to 18% in 1992,
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dropping to 10% in 2012.
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, the figure for other
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decreased
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, from 25% in 1972 to 12% in 2012.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show information on book sales in Denmark between 1972 and 2012.

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