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the number of speed cameras using in Melbourne and the percentage of road accidents and deaths occurring in this city between 2002 and 2005

the number of speed cameras using in Melbourne and the percentage of road accidents and deaths occurring in this city between 2002 and 2005 bQno6

The charts provide information about the number of speed cameras using in Melbourne and the percentage of road accidents and deaths occurring in this city between 2002 and 2005. It can be clearly seen from the bar chart that the using of speed cameras in Melbourne showed an upward trend throughout the period. In 2002, speed cameras was only around 35 units, and then it gradually rose to around 65 units in 2004 before soaring to almost 150 units in the year of 2005. Turning to the line graph, the percentage of road accidents in Melbourne had a fluctuation over the period. It was around 3. 5 per cent in 2002 then dropped and hit around 3. 7 per cent in 2004. After that, it marginally increased and reached its peak 4 per cent in 2005. As for the percentage of deaths, it showed below 1 per cent from 2002 to 2003. It reached 1 per cent in 2004 and significantly rose to almost 2 per cent. However, it reduced to 1. 2 per cent at the end.

The charts provide information about the number of speed cameras using in Melbourne and the percentage of road accidents and deaths occurring in this city between 2002 and 2005.

It can be clearly
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 from the bar chart that the using of speed cameras in Melbourne This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 an upward trend throughout the period. In 2002, speed cameras was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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before
 soaring to almost 150 units in the year of 2005.

Turning to the line graph, the percentage of road accidents in Melbourne had a fluctuation over the period. It was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
 3. 5 per cent in 2002 then dropped and hit You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovereverywhereabout
around
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showed
 below 1 per cent from 2002 to 2003. It reached 1 per cent in 2004 and significantly
 rose to almost 2 per cent. However
, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 to 1. 2 per cent at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
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