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The diagram below how a handheld extinguisher works.

The diagram below how a handheld extinguisher works. qk2aw
The diagram shows a distinctive design of a fire extinguisher and its operation. Generally, this extinguisher is a durable metal cylinder that comprises some simple components and is filled with water which is used to extinguish small fires through some uncomplicated steps. In this extinguisher, a plastic siphon tube leads from the bottom to the top of the extinguisher. A spring-mounted valve blocks the passageway from the siphon to the nozzle. At the top of the cylinder, there is a smaller cylinder filled with compressed gas. To use the extinguisher, the safety pin must be pulled out and the operating lever must be depressed. Then, the lever pushes on an actuating rod, which presses the spring-mounted valve down to open up the passage to the nozzle. It is a pressurised power and dioxide or cartridge of gas and carbon dioxide a compressed gas escapes, applying downward pressure on the water. There is also a maintenance inspection at least once a year and check weight, recharging and anxiety.
The diagram
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a distinctive design of a fire extinguisher and its operation.
Generally
, this extinguisher is a durable metal cylinder that comprises
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simple components and
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with water which is
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used
to extinguish
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small
fires through
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some
uncomplicated steps.

In this extinguisher, a plastic siphon tube leads from the bottom to the top of the extinguisher. A spring-mounted valve blocks the passageway from the siphon to the nozzle. At the top of the cylinder, there is a smaller cylinder filled with compressed gas.

To
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use
the extinguisher, the safety pin
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must
be pulled
out and the operating lever
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must
be depressed
. Then, the lever pushes on an actuating rod, which presses the spring-mounted valve down to open up the passage to the nozzle. It is a
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pressurised
power and dioxide or cartridge of gas and carbon dioxide a compressed gas escapes, applying downward pressure on the water.

There is
also
a maintenance inspection at least once a year and
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check
weight, recharging and anxiety.
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