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Changes in the average cost of housing

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The bar graph represents the changes in the average cost of housing in rural, suburban, and urban areas from the year 2010 to 2020. While the hierarchy of the costs in each area have remained the same through the decade- with urban areas with the highest costs, followed by suburban and rural areas respectively- the trends in the graphs depict an excessive rise in the housing costs over the decade. Though prices in all three areas have risen significantly, the cost of housing in urban and suburban areas have skyrocketed far more than in the rural areas. From 2010 to 2020, cost of housing in urban areas have risen from $150, 000 to $300, 000, while suburban and rural areas faced a rise in prices from $100, 000 to $275, 000 and $75, 000 to $125, 000 respectively.
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have risen from $150, 000 to $300, 000, while
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faced a rise in prices from $100, 000 to $275, 000 and $75, 000 to $125, 000
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