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the pie charts below show average household expenditure in Hong Kong and Britain in the year 2000.

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The pie charts depict the five different categories of household items in Hong Kong and Britain in 2000. Overall, food, other goods and services comprises half of the total household expenditure. As can be seen from the chart, in Britain spent nearly a quarter for food while 27% was recorded in Hong Kong. Similarly, in Britain, the expenditure of other goods and services were accounted 36%, whereas28% in Hong kong. It is evident that, 18% of outlay on housing by Britain which almost doubled in Hong Kong, at 32% respectively. Likewise, the expense of transportation in Britain was17% and Hong kong 9%. Both country spends less in clothing which was 7% in Britain, 4% in Hong Kong.
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categories of household items in Hong Kong and Britain in 2000.
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goods
and services comprises half of the total household expenditure. As can be
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from the chart, in Britain spent
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Similarly
, in Britain, the expenditure of other
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goods
and services
were accounted
36%, whereas28% in
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Hong kong
. It is evident that, 18% of outlay on housing by Britain which almost doubled in Hong Kong, at 32%
respectively
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Likewise
, the expense of transportation in Britain was17% and
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Hong kong
9%. Both country spends less in clothing which was 7% in Britain, 4% in Hong Kong.
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