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The pie charts below sahow the comparison of differnet kinds of energy production of france in two years v.2

The pie charts below sahow the comparison of differnet kinds of energy production of france in two years v. 2
The pie charts given below ilustrate the two pie charts below show the comparision of different kinds energy production of France in two years. The deta presents in percentage. Overall it can be seen that the bigest percentage was coal while thhe most negative trend was other. In the one hand in 1995 coal got 29. 80% which the bigest catagory, followed by gas which was 29. 65% was the second bigher by petro 29. 27% and followed by nuclear 6. 40% and the small which was other 4. 90%. On the other hand in 2005 coal got in crease 1. 3% folowed by gas wich was 0. 68%, but petro experince descrease 9. 27% and which experience incrase drastic was other 4. 2% and followed by nuclear 3. 7%. Notes: From the two pie charts can be accepted conclusion, from 1995 to 2005 there are experience incrase and as well as experince decrease. And for experince incrase are cial 1. 3%, gas 0. 68%, other 4. 2%, nuclear 3. 7% and which experience decrease is petro 9. 27%.
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energy production of France in two years. The
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29. 27% and followed by nuclear 6. 40% and the
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4. 90%.

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hand in 2005 coal
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4. 2% and followed by nuclear 3. 7%.

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