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The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant v.1

The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.
Given is 2 pie charts comparing favorite recreation activities of adult in Europe between 1985 and 1995. In general, it is evident that watching TV was the most widely enjoyed in the percentages over 10 years. As can be seen from the charts, a majority of European adults were interested in watching TV in the period, however the rate saw a fall of 2% from 1985 to 1995. In 1985, eating out was the second most favoured activities and this figure decreased to one-third after 10 years. Interesting, talking with family is the same, indicated a reduce from 18% to 7% of total activities. Regarding, chatting with friend was the third most popularity activities in the both of year, with making up 21% and 26% in 1985 and 1995, respectively. Specially, it is clear that play computer games had just appeared in 1995 and consisted of 27%. Finally, in terms of other activities, the rate dropped to 4% from 1985 to 1995.
Given
is 2 pie charts comparing favorite recreation
activities
of adult in Europe between 1985 and 1995.
In general
, it is evident that watching TV was the most
widely
enjoyed in the percentages over 10 years.

As can be
seen
from the charts, a majority of European adults
were interested
in watching TV in the period,
however
the rate
saw
a fall of 2% from 1985 to 1995.

In 1985, eating out was the second most
favoured
activities
and this figure decreased to one-third after 10 years. Interesting, talking with family is the same, indicated a
reduce
from 18% to 7% of total activities.

Regarding, chatting with friend was the third most popularity
activities
in the both of year, with making up 21% and 26% in 1985 and 1995,
respectively
.
Specially
, it is
clear
that play computer games had
just
appeared in 1995 and consisted of 27%.

Finally
, in terms of other
activities
, the rate dropped to 4% from 1985 to 1995.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.

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162 words
6.0
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