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The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The provided three pie charts depicts the information on World spending, population distribution across different continents and consumption of resources by the USA and Europe. From the pie chart on spending, it is evident that nearly a quarter of the globe spending is on food alone. The transportation and housing expenditures accounts for eighteen percent and twelve percent respectively. A mere six percent is spent on clothing by the world population and all the other miscellaneous categories together sums up to 40% of the total amount. The pie chart on population shows that more than half of the world's population is located in the continent of Asia. Second to Asia, Europe and America have almost similar proportions of population contributing up to 28% together. At last, a tenth of people are living in Africa and rest of the continents holds just five percent of global population. Most of the resources are consumed by the USA and Europe nations, while other nations are accountable for forty percent of consumption.
The provided three pie charts depicts the information on World spending,
population
distribution across
different
continents and consumption of resources by the USA and Europe.

From the pie chart on spending, it is evident that
nearly
a quarter of the globe spending is on food alone. The transportation and housing expenditures accounts for eighteen
percent
and twelve
percent
respectively
. A mere six
percent
is spent
on clothing by the world
population
and all the other miscellaneous categories together sums up to 40% of the total amount.

The pie chart on
population
shows
that more than half of the world's
population
is located
in the continent of Asia. Second to Asia, Europe and America have almost similar proportions of
population
contributing up to 28% together. At last, a tenth of
people
are living in Africa and rest of the continents holds
just
five
percent
of global population.

Most of the resources
are consumed
by the USA and Europe nations, while other nations are accountable for forty
percent
of consumption.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.

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