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The line chart represents the total customers in thousands from four eateries from 1990 to 2015.

The line chart represents the total customers in thousands from four eateries from 1990 to 2015. According to the graph, Donut Bro and Burger Bar had increased substantially throughout the years until 2015. In contrast, Pizza Hut and Chicken Spot decreased markedly in the given period. Started at around 2. 4 thousands customers in 1990, Donut Bro became the third customer favorite to eat. Interestingly, by the end of 2015 its customers outnumbered the other three eateries by reached 8000 customers and making it as the most favorite restaurant. The same trend followed by Burger Bar which reached almost 3. 5 times number of customers in 2015 from its initial number, around 1000 in 1990. Though Pizza Hut was the most favorite people’s choice to eat in 1990, but the trend consistently decreased thereafter with a slight increased in 2010 before finally only got 5000 customers in 2015. On the other hand, Chicken Spot trend volatiled markedly. Started at 6000 in 1990 and escalated substantially to 7000 in 2000, it finally decreased sharply and became the least favorite restaurant with only 2. 9 thousands customers in 2015.
The line chart represents the total
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customers
in thousands from four eateries from 1990 to 2015.

According to the graph, Donut Bro and Burger Bar had increased
substantially
throughout the years until 2015.
In contrast
, Pizza Hut and Chicken Spot decreased
markedly
in the
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period.

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Started
at around 2. 4 thousands
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customers
in 1990, Donut Bro became the third
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customer
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favorite
to eat.
Interestingly
, by the
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end
of 2015 its
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customers
outnumbered the other three eateries by reached 8000
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customers
and making it as the most
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favorite
restaurant. The same trend followed by Burger Bar which reached almost 3. 5 times number of
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customers
in 2015 from its initial number, around 1000 in 1990. Though Pizza Hut was the most
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favorite
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people
’s choice to eat in 1990,
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the trend
consistently
decreased thereafter with a slight increased in 2010
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before
finally
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only
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got
5000
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customers
in 2015.
On the other hand
, Chicken Spot trend
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volatiled
markedly
.
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Started
at 6000 in 1990 and escalated
substantially
to 7000 in 2000, it
finally
decreased
sharply
and became the least
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favorite
restaurant with
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only
2. 9 thousands
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customers
in 2015.
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IELTS academic The line chart represents the total customers in thousands from four eateries from 1990 to 2015.

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