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The picture below shows the use of renewable energy accounting the total energy from 1971 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram gives information about the percentage of environment-friendly energy consumption from 1971 to 2006 in six nations. The initial impression from the graph is that Finland played their pioneer role in utilizing alternative energy sources with a leading position among 6 countries, whereas Denmark, France, Germany, the US, UK witnessed upward trends during the later period of the 30-year course. In 1971, around 25% of the total energy used in Finland was green power. The figure underwent a wild fluctuation between 1976 and 2001. An opposite pattern could be observed with regard to the stage from 2001 to 2011, with the figures increasing from 20% and 23% The use of renewable energy in other countries, meanwhile, stood at different levels in 1971. The figure experienced a sharp leap of United States alternative energy users when hitching the highest point at 18% by 2011. Besides, Denmark, France, and Germany saw steady increases of around 15%.

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energy
 consumption from 1971 to 2006 in six nations.

The initial impression from the graph is that Finland played their pioneer role in utilizing alternative You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 sources with a leading position among 6 countries, whereas Denmark, France, Germany, the US, UK witnessed upward trends during the later period of the 30-year course.

In 1971, around 25% of the total You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
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used
 in Finland was green power. The figure underwent a wild fluctuation between 1976 and 2001. An opposite pattern could be observed
 with regard to the stage from 2001 to 2011, with the figures increasing from 20% and 23%

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of renewable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 in other countries, meanwhile, stood at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 levels in 1971. The figure experienced a sharp leap A determiner is probably missing here: “of the United States”.of the United States
of United States
 alternative You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 users when hitching the highest point at 18% by 2011. Besides
, Denmark, France, and Germany This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 steady increases of around 15%. 