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The bar chart shows the percentage of households with cars in a European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar chart provides information about percent of European people with cars from 1971 to 2001. Overall, It can be seen that, People having atleast one car had gradually increased. Similarly, households with more than 2 cars also increased. To begin with, In 1971 around 50% of households not have atleast 1 car. Usage of car gradually increasing year on year hence household with no cars has continously declining 5% per year. In the year 1991 is at 35% and in 2001 it is at it's lowest at 30%. At the start of the period in 1971 households having atleast 1 car and more than 2 cars is at 35% and 25% resectively. People in Europe showed more intrest in buying cars, which increased number of households with cars in 1981 and 1991 households having atleast one car is at 40% and 35% respectively. In 2001 It is at it's highest at 50%.
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given
bar chart provides information about percent of European
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people
with
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cars
from 1971 to 2001.
Overall
, It can be
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seen
that,
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People
having
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atleast
one
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car
had
gradually
increased.
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,
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households
with more than 2
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cars
also
increased.

To
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begin
with, In 1971 around 50% of
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households
not have
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atleast
1
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car
. Usage of
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car
gradually
increasing
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year
on
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year
hence
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household
with no
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cars
has
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continously
declining 5% per
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year
. In the
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year
1991 is at 35% and in 2001 it is at
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it's
lowest at 30%.

At the
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start
of the period in 1971
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households
having
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atleast
1
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car
and more than 2
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cars
is at 35% and 25%
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resectively
.
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People
in Europe
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showed
more
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intrest
in buying
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cars
, which increased number of
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households
with
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cars
in 1981 and 1991
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households
having
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atleast
one
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car
is at 40% and 35%
respectively
. In 2001 It is at
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it's
highest at 50%.
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the percentage of households with cars in a European country between 1971 and 2001.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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