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The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

The picture illustrates how water circulates in a cyclical manner, which is known as the water cycle. Overall, the process involves three main stages, namely evaporation, condensation and precipitation, through which the earth gets and maintains the levels of its surface and ground water. Notably, all three forms of water can be seen in this continuous process. First, as the sun shines in the day time, the surface of oceans gets heated, and the water is converted in to the vapor. As the resulting water vapor is light, it goes up, which is known as the evaporation. Importantly, 80% of the atmospheric water vapor comes from the oceans in this way. After being evaporated, condensation takes place, in which vapor particles combine together to form clouds higher in the sky. When clouds are overloaded and becomes heavier, it accounts for precipitation, whereby water returns to the earth in the form of either rain or snow, from which lakes are filled with and mountain tips are usually covered with, respectively. Once precipitated, certain percentage of water flows on the earth’s surface, known as surface run off, ultimately goes in to rivers and finally to oceans, from which salt water intrudes at merging points. In addition to the surface water, a certain proportion of water is absorbed by the ground and known as the ground water, which can be found above the impervious layer of the earth.
The picture illustrates how
water
circulates in a cyclical manner, which is
known
as the
water
cycle.

Overall
, the process involves three main stages,
namely
evaporation, condensation and precipitation, through which the
earth
gets
and maintains the levels of its
surface
and ground
water
.
Notably
, all three forms of
water
can be
seen
in this continuous process.

First
, as the sun shines in the day time, the
surface
of oceans
gets
heated, and the
water
is converted
in to the
vapor
. As the resulting
water
vapor
is light, it goes up, which is
known
as the evaporation.
Importantly
, 80% of the atmospheric
water
vapor
comes
from the oceans in this way. After
being evaporated
, condensation takes place, in which
vapor
particles
combine together
to form clouds higher in the sky. When clouds
are overloaded
and becomes heavier, it accounts for precipitation, whereby
water
returns to the
earth
in the form of either rain or snow, from which lakes
are filled
with and mountain tips are
usually
covered with,
respectively
. Once precipitated, certain percentage of
water
flows on the
earth’s
surface
,
known
as
surface
run off,
ultimately
goes in to rivers and
finally
to oceans, from which salt
water
intrudes at merging points.
In addition
to the
surface
water
, a certain proportion of
water
is absorbed
by the ground and
known
as the ground
water
, which can
be found
above the impervious layer of the
earth
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

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