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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. v.2

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. v. 2
The line graph compares the quantity of wheat Australia, Canada, and the European Community exported between 1985 and 1990. Overall, the European Union’s wheat shipping increased over the time while Australia experienced a downward trend in its wheat trading. Although wheat exports of the three given areas have fluctuated, Canada had the most noticeable oscillations throughout the given period. The European Union exported approximately 17. 5 million tonnes of wheat in 1985 and the export fell below 15 million tonnes in the following year. Then, it increased to 15 million tonnes in the subsequent year and remained steady in 1988. EU’s wheat export surged in the next two years and in 1990 their wheat export was more than 20 million tonnes. On the other hand, Australia’s wheat export in 1985 was the lowest, 15 million tonnes, among the given three regions. In the year that followed, the import improved with at least 1 million tonnes before it continuously declined in the subsequent years, hitting the lowest wheat export figure as little as 12 million tonnes in 1990. Canada’s wheat export was the highest of the three given regions in 1985 with nearly 20 million tonnes. Next year, it decreased to about 17 million tonnes before it significantly increased in the following two years, reaching 25 million tonnes in 1988, the highest. However, in 1989, it plunged to around 5 million tones below its initial wheat exports figure in 1985 and settled to 20 million tones and the end of the period.
The line graph compares the quantity of
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Australia, Canada, and the European Community exported between 1985 and 1990.
Overall
, the European Union’s
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wheat
shipping increased over the time while Australia experienced a downward trend in its
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wheat
trading. Although
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wheat
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exports
of the three
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given
areas have fluctuated, Canada had the most noticeable oscillations throughout the
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given
period.

The European Union exported approximately 17. 5
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million
tonnes of
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wheat
in 1985 and the
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export
fell below 15
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million
tonnes in the following
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year
. Then, it increased to 15
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million
tonnes in the subsequent
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year
and remained steady in 1988. EU’s
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wheat
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export
surged in the
next
two years and in 1990 their
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export
was more than 20
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million
tonnes.

On the other hand
, Australia’s
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wheat
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export
in 1985 was the lowest, 15
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million
tonnes, among the
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given
three regions. In the
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year
that followed, the import
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improved
with at least 1
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tonnes
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before
it
continuously
declined in the subsequent years, hitting the lowest
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wheat
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export
figure as
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as 12
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million
tonnes in 1990.

Canada’s
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export
was the highest of the three
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given
regions in 1985 with
nearly
20
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tonnes.
Next
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, it decreased to about 17
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tonnes
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before
it
significantly
increased in the following two years, reaching 25
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tonnes in 1988, the highest.
However
, in 1989, it plunged to around 5
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million
tones below its initial
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wheat
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exports
figure in 1985 and settled to 20
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million
tones and the
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end
of the period.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. v. 2

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