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the pie charts below compare water usage in san diego california

the pie charts below compare water usage in san diego california Nww5b

The given pie charts provide the proportion of water used for different purposes in two main cities San Diego, California and worldwide. Overall, as it can be clearly seen that residential water consumption in the two nations represent the largest percentage, whereas agriculture is undoubtedly the smallest. However, in the rest of the world agriculture is just over two thirds. As the diagram suggests in Sun Diego and California the consumed water by homes accounts for 60% and 39%. In contrast, nearly one-tenth of this water is consumed globally. The opposite pattern can be noticed in the figure of agriculture. It makes up the biggest segment having 69%, whereas in San Diego and California it is a less significant part. The former has only 17% and the latter 28%. The minor insignificant changes experience industry. In California, water consumption makes up one third (33%). Interesting to note that both San Diego and Worldwide shoes the same percentage at 23%.

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