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the chart shows changes in the ownership and amount of time spent doing household work in households from 1940 to 2019. Summarize the information.

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The chart illustrates the possession of electrical household appliances namely vacuum cleaner, washing machine and refrigerator over a decade (1920-1999). This essay will highlight all the important trends of data depicted in the chart. Overall, People showed a keen interest to own an electric home appliance as there was a significant rise in appliances from 1920 to 2019. Meanwhile there was a significant dip in time spent for the household chores as the years progressed owing to mechanization. In 1920, people had no refrigerators, while 30% households had a vacuum cleaner followed by washing machines, which consisted 40 percent of the household. Therefore, the average time spent for the household was the highest amongst all the years. On the other hand during 1940’s to 2000’s the percentage of vacuum cleaners increased from 50 percent to 40 percent, this trend has also continued for the refrigeration as most household share increased from 60 percent to 90 percent Additionally, washing machines percentage has improved from 40 percent in 1940 to 70 percent in 1980 followed by a downward trend. The number of working hours spent during 1940’s to 2000’s has drastically reduced due to spike in electrical appliances at households. In the recent year 2019, people used appliances in maximum, as the appliances grew in number but these numbers had demonstrated a steady growth from 2000’s as the use age of washing machine grew only by 8% with no further changes in the percentage of refrigeration and vacuum. In conclusion, there was a steady rise in the utilization of electric appliances from 1920 to 2019, which accounted for low working hours per week.
The chart illustrates the possession of electrical
household
appliances
namely
vacuum cleaner, washing
machine
and refrigerator over a decade (1920-1999). This essay will highlight all the
important
trends of data depicted in the chart.

Overall
,
People
showed
a keen interest to
own
an electric home
appliance
as there was a significant rise in
appliances
from 1920 to 2019.
Meanwhile
there was a significant dip in time spent for the
household
chores as the years progressed owing to mechanization.

In 1920,
people
had no refrigerators, while 30%
households
had a vacuum cleaner followed by washing
machines
, which consisted 40
percent
of the
household
.
Therefore
, the average time spent for the
household
was the highest amongst all the years.
On the other hand
during 1940’s
to
2000’s
the percentage of vacuum cleaners increased from 50
percent
to 40
percent
, this trend has
also
continued for the refrigeration as most
household
share increased from 60
percent
to 90
percent
Additionally
, washing
machines
percentage has
improved
from 40
percent
in 1940 to 70
percent
in 1980 followed by a downward trend. The number of working hours spent
during 1940’s
to
2000’s
has
drastically
reduced
due to spike in electrical
appliances
at households.

In the recent year 2019,
people
used
appliances
in maximum, as the
appliances
grew in number
but
these numbers had demonstrated a steady growth from
2000’s
as the
use
age of washing
machine
grew
only
by 8% with no
further
changes
in the percentage of refrigeration and vacuum.

In conclusion
, there was a steady rise in the utilization of electric
appliances
from 1920 to 2019, which accounted for low working hours per week.
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