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The pie charts above show the percentages of industry sectors contributed to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Write a report of at least 150 words reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The given pie charts show percentages that contributed to the economy of Turkey by sector between two years, in 2000 and 2016. Overall, agriculture and government had a downtrend, while construction and manufacturing experienced upward trends in 2000 and 2016. In the beginning, Agriculture was the most Contribution to the economy of Turkey by sector, the percentages of agriculture were 24% in 2000. Although, drop significantly 10% to 14% in 2016. Likewise, Government and Leisure Hospital was in the same condition but they declined steeply Government from 12% to 9% and Leisure hospital from 17% drop to 14%. Meanwhile, Construction was the lowest Contribution to the economy in turkey by sector in 2000. However, construction was uplift slightly by 7% in 2013, from 3% in 2000 to 10% in 2016. Furthermore, Manufacturing contribution was 8% in 2000 but it rose slightly 4% in 2016 to 12% and same as Trade, Utilities, and Transportation, they Uplift 2%, from 14% in 2000 to 16% in 2016.
The
given
pie charts
show
percentages that contributed to the economy of Turkey by sector between two years, in 2000 and 2016.
Overall
, agriculture and
government
had a downtrend, while construction and manufacturing experienced upward trends in 2000 and 2016.

In the beginning, Agriculture was the most Contribution to the economy of Turkey by sector, the percentages of agriculture were 24% in 2000.
Although
, drop
significantly
10% to 14% in 2016.
Likewise
,
Government
and Leisure Hospital was in the same condition
but
they declined
steeply
Government
from 12% to 9% and Leisure hospital from 17% drop to 14%.

Meanwhile, Construction was the lowest Contribution to the economy in
turkey
by sector in 2000.
However
, construction was uplift
slightly
by 7% in 2013, from 3% in 2000 to 10% in 2016.
Furthermore
, Manufacturing contribution was 8% in 2000
but
it rose
slightly
4% in 2016 to 12% and same as Trade, Utilities, and Transportation, they Uplift 2%, from 14% in 2000 to 16% in 2016.
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IELTS academic The pie charts above show the percentages of industry sectors contributed to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Write a report of at least 150 words reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
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