Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The pie charts above show the percentages of industry sectors contributed to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Write a report of at least 150 words reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The given pie charts show percentages that contributed to the economy of Turkey by sector between two years, in 2000 and 2016. Overall, agriculture and government had a downtrend, while construction and manufacturing experienced upward trends in 2000 and 2016. In the beginning, Agriculture was the most Contribution to the economy of Turkey by sector, the percentages of agriculture were 24% in 2000. Although, drop significantly 10% to 14% in 2016. Likewise, Government and Leisure Hospital was in the same condition but they declined steeply Government from 12% to 9% and Leisure hospital from 17% drop to 14%. Meanwhile, Construction was the lowest Contribution to the economy in turkey by sector in 2000. However, construction was uplift slightly by 7% in 2013, from 3% in 2000 to 10% in 2016. Furthermore, Manufacturing contribution was 8% in 2000 but it rose slightly 4% in 2016 to 12% and same as Trade, Utilities, and Transportation, they Uplift 2%, from 14% in 2000 to 16% in 2016.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 pie charts This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 percentages that contributed to the economy of Turkey by sector between two years, in 2000 and 2016. Overall
, agriculture and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 had a downtrend, while construction and manufacturing experienced upward trends in 2000 and 2016.

In the beginning, Agriculture was the most Contribution to the economy of Turkey by sector, the percentages of agriculture were 24% in 2000. “Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, drop significantly
 10% to 14% in 2016. Likewise
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
 and Leisure Hospital was in the same condition This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they declined steeply
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
 from 12% to 9% and Leisure hospital from 17% drop to 14%.

Meanwhile, Construction was the lowest Contribution to the economy in Did you mean the country “Turkey” (which needs to be capitalized)?Turkey
turkey
 by sector in 2000. However
, construction was uplift slightly
 by 7% in 2013, from 3% in 2000 to 10% in 2016. Furthermore
, Manufacturing contribution was 8% in 2000 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it rose slightly
 4% in 2016 to 12% and same as Trade, Utilities, and Transportation, they Uplift 2%, from 14% in 2000 to 16% in 2016. 