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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

A glance at the graph provided reveals the rate of male and female passing the ir driving test in a country of Asia over the 3-decade period, starting from 1980. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the number of women and men who satisfy the driving tests experienced upward trends. Another interesting feature is that the quanity of woman passing this exams was always higher than that of men over the period mentioned. Starting at 48 people in 1980, the number of women passing the driving test continued increasing slightly to 52 in the next ten years. After that, there was an moderate rise in the figure, from 52 people to 78 people until 2000 and from then on, the figure decreased marginally by 4 people in the year 2010. By cotrast, the number of men passing the driving tests is more lower than that of women, which had only 28 people in 1980. In the next one decade, the figure rose steadily by 10 people, from 28 to 38 people. It is interesting to note that, in the last two decades, the quantity of men satisfying the tests still remain unchanged, approximately 49 people.
A glance at the graph provided reveals the rate of male and female
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passing
the
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ir
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driving
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test
in a country of Asia over the 3-decade period, starting from 1980.

Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the number of women and
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men
who satisfy the
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driving
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tests
experienced upward trends. Another interesting feature is that the
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quanity
of woman
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passing
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this
exams was always higher than that of
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men
over the period mentioned.

Starting at 48
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people
in 1980, the number of women
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passing
the
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driving
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test
continued increasing
slightly
to 52 in the
next
ten years. After that, there was
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an
moderate rise in the figure, from 52
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people
to 78
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people
until 2000 and from then on, the figure decreased
marginally
by 4
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people
in the year 2010.

By
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cotrast
, the number of
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men
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passing
the
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driving
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tests
is
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more lower
than that of women, which had
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only
28
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people
in 1980. In the
next
one decade, the figure rose
steadily
by 10
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people
, from 28 to 38
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people
. It is interesting to note that, in the last two decades, the quantity of
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men
satisfying the
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tests
still
remain unchanged, approximately 49
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people
.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

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4 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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