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The pie chart shows the reasons for students

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The given pie charts depict the prime reasons for which students opted to choose particular UK university to study in 1987 and 2007 in percentage. Overall, it is clear that largest proportion of students were opted particular university for a suitable degree of courses in both the years. Moreover, around one-fifth proportion were opted since of the quality of resources. In 1987, almost identical proportion of students took quality of resources and good sports and social activities into consideration. However, 35% of student's prime reason to choose that particular university of UK was of the suitable degree of courses availability. 10% of students were likely to opt because of close accommodation from the university and 15 percent due to the quality of teaching. With regard to the year 2007, the largest proportion of students who took their admission in university by taking suitable degree of courses into consideration. Moreover, almost one-fifth of total proportion of students witnessed to choose particular university due to the quality of resources and teaching staffs. Furthermore, slight less than a quarter of proportion were taken their close parental home from university into priority. The least students which were almost 6 in percentage opted since of good sport and social activities.
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