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THE GRAPH AND TABLE BELOW GIVE INFORMARION ABOUT WATER USE WORLDWIDE AND WATER CONSUPION IN TWO DIFFERENT COUNTRIES

THE GRAPH AND TABLE BELOW GIVE INFORMARION ABOUT WATER USE WORLDWIDE AND WATER CONSUPION IN TWO DIFFERENT COUNTRIES yXeDD

The line graph and the table chart illustrate the information about global water use by various sectors (Agriculture, Industrial use, Domestic use ), and water consumed in Brazil and Congo in the year 2000. Overall, The Majority of the water used in the agriculture sector by worldwide. While, water consumption was more used in Brazil, then Democratic Republic of Congo. In 1900, around 500km3 of water was used by the agriculture sector in worldwide. In contrast, the figures for Industrial and domestic water consumption stood at around one fifth of the amount. Whereas, by 2000, global water use for agriculture had climbed to around 3000 km3, industrial water use had risen to merely under half that amount, and domestic consumption had reached approximately 250 km3. It can be clearly seen in the year 2000, the citizens of Brazil and Congo were 176 million and 5. 2 million respectively. Additionally, Water consumption per person in Brazil at 359m3, was much higher than that in the Congo, at only 8m3, and this could be explained by the fact that Brazil had 265 times more irrigated land.

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