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THE GRAFH AND TABLE BELOW GIVE INFORMATION ABOUT WATER USE WORLDWIDE AND WATER CONSUMPTION IN TWO DIFFERENT COUNTRIES .

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The line graph and the table chart illustrate the information about global water use by various sectors (Agriculture, Industrial use, Domestic use), and water consumed in brazil and congo in the year 2000. Overall, Majority of the water used in the agriculture sector by worldwide. Whereas, water consrmption was more used in Brazil, then Democratic Republic of congo. In 1900, around 500km3 of water was uded by the agriculture sector in worldwide. The figures fpr Industrial and domestic water consumption stood at around one fifth of the amount. By 2000, global water use for agriculture had climbed to around 3000 km3, industrial water ude had risen to just under half that amount, and domestic consumption hadd reached approximately 250 km3. In the yera 2000, the citizens of Braxil and Congo were 176 million and 5. 2 million respectively. Water consumption per person in Brazil at 359m3, was much higher than that in the congo, at only 8m3, and this could be explained by the fact that Brazil had 265 times more irrigated land.
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by various sectors
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, Domestic
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consumed in
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in the year 2000.

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sector by worldwide. Whereas,
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Industrial and domestic
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consumption stood at around one fifth of the amount. By 2000, global
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by the fact that Brazil had 265 times more irrigated land.
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IELTS academic THE GRAFH AND TABLE BELOW GIVE INFORMATION ABOUT WATER USE WORLDWIDE AND WATER CONSUMPTION IN TWO DIFFERENT COUNTRIES.

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