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The given pie charts regarding the use of water in six regions across the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given pie charts regarding the use of water in six regions across the world. PVAEB
A glance at the pie charts illustrate information about utilisation of water in six different regions in three categories. Mainly industrial, agricultural and domestic use. Overall, it is clear that the highest use of water founded was agricultural sector and the domestic sector. To start with, the charts represent that the increase consumption of water for agricultural purpose is in Africa, central Asia, south east asia and south america which was 84%, 88%and, 71% respectively, whereas the least water consumption in industrial is made by north America and Europe which is just 39%, 32%. However, water usage in industrial is intermediate used in north america, Europe which. Was 48%, 53%. Moreover, the decline consumption of water for industrial is in central Asia and Africa which was 5%, 7%. Although, the water utilisation in domestic sector is minimum made in Africa, central Asia and South East Asia which was 9%and 7% it's equal. and the other intermediate countries is in north America, south america and Europe which was13%, 19% and 15%.
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utilisation
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industrial
, agricultural and domestic
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founded was agricultural sector and the domestic sector.

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with, the charts represent that the increase consumption of
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for agricultural purpose is in Africa,
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central Asia
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south east
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asia
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south america
which was 84%, 88%and, 71%
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consumption in
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north america
, Europe which. Was 48%, 53%.
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central Asia
and Africa which was 5%, 7%. Although, the
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IELTS academic The given pie charts regarding the use of water in six regions across the world.

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