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the pie chart shows the main reasons why agriculture land becomes less productive. the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

the pie chart shows the main reasons why agriculture land becomes less productive. the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. mKBn
The two pie chart below reflect the degradation cause in worldwide and three regions in 1990s. A pie chart show the cause's percentage in global and a different table will also show the percent of land was degraded by some main problems of north-america, europe, oceania. As we can see that, in a pie chart most of the highest land degradation was by over- grazing about 35% however, deforestation amount of percentage was almost by 30% and over-cultivation and degradation was done by 28% morever, the lowest land degradation was about 7% by others. on the other hand, in a table of land degradation of north america highly land degraded by over- cultivation about 3. 3%. morever, deforestation was the very large percentage of majority about 9. 8%. finally, in oceania percentage of land degradation was the highest from other about 11. 3% by over-grazing. In conclusion, worldwide land degradation by over over- grazing and total land degraded were by europe about 23%.
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IELTS academic the pie chart shows the main reasons why agriculture land becomes less productive. the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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