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The diagram illustrates the process that solar energy is affected by global warm.

The diagram illustrates the process that solar energy is affected by global warm. N15y
The diagram illustrates the process that solar energy is affected by global warm. It can be seen that there are various aspects which divide to natural and industrial sides that all lead to occupation the phenomenon. In terms of nature, deforestation is considered the major reason of greenhouse gases whereas felling of trees drives to absorb carbon dioxide. While heat is produced by the sun, its energy is radiated into wide space. Moreover, the o2 reduces for the previous reason and that goes to trap the high heat in the air. As a result, sun energy reflect off atmosphere layer. In the other hand, every sort of pollution has to be active downside too. Lorries and cars' vapor, and factories burning fossil fuels contributes negatively to the environment and subsequently, it exacerbates the problem.
The diagram illustrates the process that solar energy is
affected
by global warm. It can be
seen
that there are various aspects which divide to natural and industrial sides that all lead to occupation the phenomenon. In terms of nature, deforestation
is considered
the major reason of greenhouse gases whereas felling of trees drives to absorb carbon dioxide. While heat
is produced
by the sun, its energy
is radiated
into wide space.
Moreover
, the o2
reduces
for the previous reason and that goes to trap the high heat in the air.
As a result
, sun energy reflect off atmosphere layer. In the other hand, every sort of pollution
has to
be active downside too. Lorries and cars' vapor, and factories burning fossil fuels contributes
negatively
to the environment and
subsequently
, it exacerbates the problem.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the process that solar energy is affected by global warm.

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  American English
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134 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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