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The diagram illustrates the process that solar energy is affected by global warm.

The diagram illustrates the process that solar energy is affected by global warm. N15y

The diagram illustrates the process that solar energy is affected by global warm. It can be seen that there are various aspects which divide to natural and industrial sides that all lead to occupation the phenomenon. In terms of nature, deforestation is considered the major reason of greenhouse gases whereas felling of trees drives to absorb carbon dioxide. While heat is produced by the sun, its energy is radiated into wide space. Moreover, the o2 reduces for the previous reason and that goes to trap the high heat in the air. As a result, sun energy reflect off atmosphere layer. In the other hand, every sort of pollution has to be active downside too. Lorries and cars' vapor, and factories burning fossil fuels contributes negatively to the environment and subsequently, it exacerbates the problem.

The diagram illustrates the process that solar energy is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 by global warm. It can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that there are various aspects which divide to natural and industrial sides that all lead to occupation the phenomenon. In terms of nature, deforestation is considered
 the major reason of greenhouse gases whereas felling of trees drives to absorb carbon dioxide. While heat is produced
 by the sun, its energy is radiated
 into wide space. Moreover
, the o2 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviates
reduces
 for the previous reason and that goes to trap the high heat in the air. As a result
, sun energy reflect off atmosphere layer. In the other hand, every sort of pollution This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 be active downside too. Lorries and cars' vapor, and factories burning fossil fuels contributes negatively
 to the environment and subsequently
, it exacerbates the problem. 

IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the process that solar energy is affected by global warm.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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