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The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. L1WK
The two maps illustrate how village of Stokeford, where situated east cost of River Stoke had been changed in 80 yearr between 1930 and 2010. Overall, there was noticable urbanization factors over this years and it was transformed from small rural places into largely residential area. Firstly, the most significiant change is presence of residential places which were area of farmland in 1930. Due to increase of population there are increasing number of houses. In addition new roads constarcted for easy and primary school was extended around doubled its size of previous bulding. Furhermore, the post office and bridge remained in the same place, but the two shops that canbe seen north side of post office in 1930, no longer existed by 2010. it is also replaced by houses. In 1930 version of map, there was a private large house with its garden, whereares it converted into retierement houses in 2010. This was another substantial transformation for the village.
The two maps illustrate how village of
Stokeford
, where situated east cost of River Stoke had been
changed
in 80
yearr
between 1930 and 2010.

Overall
, there was
noticable
urbanization factors over
this years
and it
was transformed
from
small
rural places into
largely
residential area.

Firstly
, the most
significiant
change
is presence of residential places which were area of farmland in 1930. Due to increase of population there are increasing number of
houses
. In
addition
new roads
constarcted
for easy and primary school
was extended
around doubled its size of previous
bulding
.

Furhermore
, the post office and bridge remained in the same place,
but
the two shops that
canbe
seen
north side of post office in 1930, no longer existed by 2010.
it
is
also
replaced by
houses
. In 1930 version of map, there was a private large
house
with its garden,
whereares
it converted into
retierement
houses
in 2010. This was another substantial transformation for the village.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.

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159 words
6.0
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