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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph illustrates the proportion of male and female faculty members in seven departments of a university in the year 2012. Overall, the departments like education and engineering showed major dominations in either of the genders respectively. While, the remaining groups had considerable ratios of men and women. Firstly, the blocks like arts, education and medicine contained more female faculties than male ones. The arts group consisted of nearly 60 percent of females and 40 percent male lecturers. The medicine block constituted almost equal staff members with a slightly more female member around 2%. While, the two departments had hold considerable ratios of men and women, the education department was more female dominated with approximately thrice as much as male staff. Secondly, the staff members of business, engineering, law and science departments had more men compared to women. The business, law and science divisions consisted nearly seventy percent, sixty percent and around sixty-five percent of male members respectively and the rest were female. However, the rate of male members in engineering outraced the female with a percentage of more than eighty.

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