Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The charts below show the result of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reason why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared

The charts below show the result of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reason why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared 2jY6

The pie charts below illustrates the result of a survey about motive of adult education and how the course should be funded. Overall it is noticeable that that the main reasons are their interests in subject and for gain qualification also most of the respondents think that course should be funded by individuals. According to the bar chart the 40% of adults wants to go to school back because of their interests whereas the proportion of people which wants to get qualification has 38% respectively. In contrast the least popular reason is to meet people takes only 9% from all chart As for the result of next survey the significant part of the adults (40 %) think that course must be paid by individuals whike 35% believe their employers should take the responsibility and only one-fourth outlines that it should be collected from the taxpayers' money.

The pie charts below illustrates the result of a survey about motive of adult education and how the course should be funded
.

Overall
 it is noticeable Possible typo: you repeated a wordthat
that that
 the main reasons are their interests in subject and for gain qualification also
 most of the respondents This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that course should be funded
 by individuals.

According to the bar chart the 40% of adults wants to go to school back This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of their interests whereas the proportion of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 which wants to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 qualification has 38% respectively
. In Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?contrast,
contrast
 the least popular reason is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.take
takes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 9% from all chart

As for the result of next
 survey the significant part of the adults (40 %) This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that course This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be paid
 by individuals Possible spelling mistake found.whilewhiteWhitehikewhinew hike
whike
 35% believe their employers should take the responsibility and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one-fourth outlines that it should be collected
 from the taxpayers' money. 