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The pie chart shows the information about viewing the news in two countries namely Canada and Australia.

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The pie chart shows the information about viewing the news in two countries namely Canada and Australia. Overall, in both countries online news has the highest demand and the least contribution to the access of news is not known in both nations. The most popular way of providing news to the people is through internet, contributing for 36% in Canada and more than half i. e. , 52% in Australia. One fourth of the total news is viewed through the televisions in Canada, while 37% is used in Australia. Another popular way of accessing the news is through print media which contributes of 14% in Canada and half of it (7%) in Australia. Getting news through radio is not so popular in Australia where it contributes to only 2% but in Canada it is 7%. The other means of news channels which are not specified consists of 3% and 2% in Canada and Australia respectively.
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the information about viewing the
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in two countries
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Canada and Australia.
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, in both countries online
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has the highest demand and the least contribution to the access of
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is not known in both nations.

The most popular way of providing
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to the
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people
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internet, contributing for 36% in Canada and more than half
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52% in Australia. One fourth of the total
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news
is viewed
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through
the televisions in Canada, while 37% is
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used
in Australia. Another popular way of accessing the
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news
is
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print media which contributes of 14% in Canada and half of it (7%) in Australia.

Getting
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news
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radio is not
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popular in Australia where it contributes to
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2%
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in Canada it is 7%. The other means of
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channels which are not specified consists of 3% and 2% in Canada and Australia
respectively
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IELTS academic The pie chart shows the information about viewing the news in two countries namely Canada and Australia.

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