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The figure shows the number of worker employed in three different areas in the United Kingdom between 1980 and 1990.

The figure shows the number of worker employed in three different areas in the United Kingdom between 1980 and 1990. q5EM5
The given line graph provides information about the amount of workers employed in engineering, service industries and agriculture in the United Kingdom between 1980 and 1990. Overall, the amount of workers employed in Service industries slightly rose while the amount of workers employed in agriculture and engineering experienced a downward trend. In early 1980 the amount of workers employed in service industries and agriculture were nearly fifty thousands. During 1980 – 1986, the amount of workers in service industries remained steady. Nevertheless, it dramatically rose to almost ninety thousands. In comparison with service industries, the amount of agriculture experienced a plunge after 1980. Therefore, the figure for service industries became the highest numbers of workers, and the figure for agriculture became the lowest numbers of workers by the end of period. The figure for the workers employed in Engineering at around forty thousands of workers in 1980, and there was a noticeable fall during the period, it dropped steadily to twenty thousand in 1990.
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in the United Kingdom between 1980 and 1990.
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Service
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industries
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and engineering experienced a downward trend.

In early 1980 the
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remained steady.
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agriculture
experienced a plunge after 1980.
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service
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industries
became the highest numbers of
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, and the figure for
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agriculture
became the lowest numbers of
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by the
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of period.

The figure for the
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in Engineering at around
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in 1980, and there was a noticeable fall during the period, it dropped
steadily
to twenty thousand in 1990.
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IELTS academic The figure shows the number of worker employed in three different areas in the United Kingdom between 1980 and 1990.

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