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The chart shows the energy production from different sources.

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The supplied pie chart depicts information regarded to the production of energy from different kind of sources. Over all, it is lucid that the highest proportion of coal which was produced to energy, where as the least was other sources in given both year's. After having a myopic observation, it is identified that the maximum percentage of coal which was produced to energy accounted as 29. 80% in 1995, while after a decade it was increased by 1%. After that, only 29. 27% of energy produced by petro source in 1995 as opposed to 2005(19. 55%). However, nuclear was produced to energy merely 6. 40% in 1995 than that of 2005. furthermore, energy was produced by gas, reported as 29% in1995, whereas it was inclined till 30% in 2005.
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