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The pie chart shows the information about the china regarding the expenditure from 1995 to 2011.

The pie chart shows the information about the china regarding the expenditure from 1995 to 2011. 30Nel

The two pie chart depicts the information about the percentage of household budget for necessities in China between 1995 and 2011. After analyze the data, it can be seen clearly that individuals spent spent money of the total income on household goods that 68% in 1995 but after the 16 years that percentile was decline by 9%. However, in China people spending on the medicine was almost identical in both the year that about 18 respectively. The pie further collates that in 1995 masses spend money on cloths accounted at 4% on the contrary, in 2011 this ratio was multiply 3 times than pervious percentage. while,

The two pie chart depicts the information about the percentage of household budget for necessities in China between 1995 and 2011.

After analyze the data, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
clearly
 that individuals Possible typo: you repeated a wordspent
spent spent
 money of the total income on household This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 that 68% in 1995 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 after the 16 years that percentile was decline by 9%. However
, in China This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 spending on the medicine was almost identical in both the year that about 18 respectively
.

The pie further
 collates that in 1995 masses spend money on cloths accounted at 4% on the contrary
, in 2011 this ratio was multiply 3 Use "(times)" to make a comparison with this adjective.(times)
times
 than Possible spelling mistake found.previous
pervious
 percentage. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhile
while
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