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some proposed changes to the central of the town of Islip.

some proposed changes to the central of the town of Islip. 5BJRV
The given maps illustrate some proposed changes to the central of the town of Islip. The general overview here is that the principle changes of the town will be the construction of a ring road around the center. Various other developments with regard to shop and housing will accompany building of this road. According to first map, in the present, this town consists of the main road rans though its center from east to west. there is a row of the shops along either side of this road, which on the northern of the shops is a countryside, while to the south there are two sets of housing and school. According to the future planned of this town, the main road will planned to pedestrians only. Traffic will be diverted on to a dual carriageway that will from a ring around the town center. The shops along the north of new pedestrian street and the countryside will be demolished to make way for a bus station, shopping center, car park and new housing area. The shops along the south side will remain, but it seem that the town’s park will be reduced in size so that new houses can be built within the ring road. Moreover the school will be expanded in oder to support the number of citizens increased.
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given
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some
proposed
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changes
to the central of the
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town
of
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Islip
. The general overview here is that the principle
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changes
of the
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town
will be the construction of a ring
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road
around the center. Various other developments with regard to
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shop
and housing will accompany building of this road.

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first
map, in the present, this
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town
consists of the main
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road
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rans
though its center from east to west.
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there
is a row of the
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shops
along either side of this
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road
, which on the northern of the
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shops
is a countryside, while to the south there are two sets of housing and school.

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town
, the main
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road
will
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to pedestrians
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. Traffic will
be diverted
on to a dual carriageway that will from a ring around the
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town
center. The
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shops
along the north of new pedestrian street and the countryside will
be demolished
to
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make
way for a bus station, shopping center, car park and new housing area. The
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shops
along the south side will remain,
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it
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that the
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town’s
park will be
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reduced
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so
that new
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houses
can
be built
within the ring
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road
.
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to support the number of citizens increased.
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IELTS academic some proposed changes to the central of the town of Islip.

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6.0
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