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BAR CHART SHOWING PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLDS WITH CARS IN A EUROPEAN COUNTRY

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THE CHART ILLUSTRATES THE COMPARISON IN PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLDS WITH NO CAR, ONE CAR AND MORE THAN TWO CARS IN A EUROPEAN COUNTRY OVER A PERIOD OF 30 YEARS STARTING FROM 1971. ITS CLEAR THAT, IN THE YEAR 1971 ALMOST HALF OF THE POPULATION HAD NO CAR AND OVER 30 YEARS THE TREND DECREASED. AND BY 2001 APROXIMATELY ONE QUARTER OF POPULATION WAS THERE WITHOUT A CAR. BY YEAR 1981 AMLOST HALF OF POPULATION HAD 1 CAR AND IN 2001 HALF OF THE OF POPULATION HAD ATLEAST 1 CAR. IN 1971 A QUARTER OF POPULATION OWNED MORE THAN TWO CARS AND OVER 30 YEARS MORE THAN ONE THIRD OF POPULATION OWNED MORE THAN 2 CARS. THE PROPORTION OF PEOPLE BUYING MORE THAN TWO CARS AND WITH PEOPLE DO NOT OWN A CAR WAS ALMOST SAME IN YEAR 1981 AND ALSO IN 1991. EVEN BOTH OF THIS TREND SHOWN A SLIGHT DECREASE OVER 10 YEARS STARTING FROM 1981. THE PERCENTAGE OF PEOPLE BUYING 1 CAR AND MORE THAN 2 CARS SHOWN A SIGNIFICANT INCREASE OVER THE 30 YEARS. IN CONCLUSION, OVERALL HALF OF THE POPULATION OWN ATLEAST 1 CAR. AND ONLY A QUARTER OF PEOPLE WAS THERE WITHOUT A CAR. OVER EACH 10 YEARS THE PROPORTION OF PEOPLE WITHOUT A CAR SHOWN A DRASTIC DECREASE.
THE CHART ILLUSTRATES THE COMPARISON IN PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLDS WITH NO
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IN A EUROPEAN COUNTRY
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A PERIOD OF 30 YEARS STARTING FROM 1971.

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HAD NO
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30 YEARS THE TREND DECREASED. AND BY 2001
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SHOWN A SIGNIFICANT INCREASE
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THE 30 YEARS.

IN CONCLUSION
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SHOWN A DRASTIC DECREASE.
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IELTS academic BAR CHART SHOWING PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLDS WITH CARS IN A EUROPEAN COUNTRY

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