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The bar graph shows the rate of unemployed women in 10 countries in Europe

The bar graph shows the rate of unemployed women in 10 countries in Europe b2dpX

It can be seen that the given bar graph illustrates the unemployment rate of women in 10 European countries from 1995 to 2000. At the first glance, the proportion of unemployed European women in the year 1995 is lower than the number of women who were unemployed in 2000. In 1995, there was a high rate of jobless women in the UK, Germany, and Italy. In this year, the rate of unemployed British women, over 4%, was the highest out of ten developed nations. In contrast, over this year, around 1% of women in the Netherlands were unemployed, which was the lowest rate among these European countries. In the 2000 period, the proportion of idle women in ten countries changed substantially with the higher data. In this time, Denmark replaced the UK with the unemployed women rate was well above approximately 18%. On the contrary, the graph demonstrates the lowest rate of jobless women across these countries was in Spain, near 6%.

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, over 4%, was the highest out of ten developed nations. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 among these European countries.

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 this time, Denmark replaced the UK with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withidleinactivejoblessunderemployed
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 was well above approximately 18%. On the contrary
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 across these countries was in Spain, near 6%. 