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column graph illustrates the information regarding giving money to charitable organisation by different age group of canadians from 2000 to 2015.

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The given column graph illustrates the information regarding giving money to charitable organisation by different age group of canadians from 2000 to 2015. In 2008 the most canadian people whose age between 35 249 gave money to charitable organisation it was 39% where is the lowest donation was given by the 8224 age group it was 18% in 2028 person donation was given by the age group between 25 to 34 in 2008 group between 5264 gave money to NGOs by 34% in 2030 1% of people help the carrot table organisation whose age 65 and over in 2000 have ever it had experience arise to 34% in 2015 in 2015 the donation by age group between 18 to 24 was decrease to 11% however the age group to 1564 was inclined of 37% to give money to Charitable Trust whereas in other age group 25 to 34 and 35 249 was also declined to 25% and 34% in 2015 than 2000. Overall it can be concluded that more and more canadians people ready to give their money to the Charitable Trust in 2012 and 2015 it was show downward Trend.
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between 35 249 gave
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charitable
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it was 39% where is the lowest donation was
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age
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group
it was 18% in 2028 person donation was
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given
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age
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group
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between 25 to 34
in 2008
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group
between 5264 gave
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money
to NGOs by 34% in 2030 1% of
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people
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help
the carrot table
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65 and over in 2000 have ever it had
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arise to 34% in 2015 in 2015 the donation by
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between 18 to 24
was decrease to 11%
however
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age
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group
to 1564
was inclined
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money
to
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Charitable
Trust whereas in other
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age
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25 to 34 and 35 249 was
also
declined to 25% and 34% in 2015 than 2000.

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that more and more
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canadians
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IELTS academic column graph illustrates the information regarding giving money to charitable organisation by different age group of canadians from 2000 to 2015.

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191 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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