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The pie chart shows the employment sectors chosen by the graduates of Brighton University in 2019.

The pie chart shows the employment sectors chosen by the graduates of Brighton University in 2019. YrGm

The pie chart shows the employment sectors chosen by the graduates of Brighton University in 2019. Specifically, it gives the percentage of graduates who chose each of nine categories, ranging from services to charities. Overall, nearly half of the graduates chose to work in the top two sectors, services and manufacturing. Sport and charitable organizations were the least popular. A significant per cent of the graduates entered service industries, and close to sixteen per cent of them opted for manufacturing industries. While around fifteen per cent of the graduates selected Education, however, twelve per cent entered politics and government sectors instead. According to the data provided, Science and Technology and Civil Services did not have many takers: while less than eight per cent selecting the former, whereas only six per cent of them entered the latter. Sports and Charity were the least sought after sectors as less than one per cent of the graduates chose each of them.

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