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The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. 7R85

The picture provides information about the process to produce frozen fish pies. Overall, the ingredients of fish pies are peas, sauce, fish and potato. There are approximately 16 steps to make this frozen dish. Firstly, the aged of potatoes must not be more than a month. before potatoes are cooked, it has to be washed, peeled and cut as a slice. It is then boiled and chilled before put it in the storage. Next step is prepared fresh salmon. The salmon has to be seasoning by lemon juice and salt. It can not be chilled more than 12 hours before steam by oven. After the salmon is cooked, it has to be removed skins and bones. Then, salmon will be check and put peas and sauce together. The process will combine those three ingredients with potato which have been prepared. After they wrap the packaging, they will freeze pie fish and then keep or dispatch it.

The picture provides information about the process to produce frozen fish pies.

Overall
, the ingredients of fish pies are peas, sauce, fish and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potato
. There are approximately 16 steps to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 this frozen dish.

Firstly
, the aged of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 not be more than a month. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBefore
before
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
are cooked
, it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
be washed
, peeled and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 as a slice. It is then boiled and chilled This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 put it in the storage.

Next
 step is prepared
 fresh salmon. The salmon This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 be seasoning by lemon juice and salt. It can not be chilled
 more than 12 hours This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 steam by oven. After the salmon is cooked
, it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
be removed
 skins and bones. Then, salmon will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 and put peas and sauce together. The process will combine those three ingredients with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potato
 which have been prepared
. After they wrap the packaging, they will freeze pie fish and then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 or dispatch it. 